Respuesta :
					                   I might be wrong, but I think the error is the way they spelled okay. When you are writing in an essay or any other forms of writing, I think you’re supposed to spell the word out instead of abbreviating it.
I hope this helps :)
					                
					             I hope this helps :)
					                   Maybe take out the extra sentence?
Or
Cut the periods … to one period to make it grammatically.
Hope this helps mark me brainliest
					                
					             Or
Cut the periods … to one period to make it grammatically.
Hope this helps mark me brainliest
